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lily the poet????

on November 14, 2016

hello, I’ve decided to share a poem I wrote a while ago that isn’t a very happy poem and I don’t think it’s that good anyway, but here it is. it’s short, so this blog post will probably be short, too.




what did you think? was it good? what do you think the meaning is?

HAHA just kidding! that isn’t the real poem. the real one is below, with a picture:


snow cone man


big, strong hands handed

the perfect moon of ice

a cold paper cone for a cold paper girl

she said thank you like she was singing

the blues

sad he thought

he was the big man behind the counter

and he had no words he wanted

to say something

to assure her don’t worry it’s alright

you probably won’t ever feel so sad

or be so blue

as the guy in my freezer


4 Responses to “lily the poet????”

  1. 2022reh says:

    Hi! My name is Rylee. I really like your poem because it talks about food, and I love food. I don’t really like snow cones. What is your favorite food? Come visit my blog @

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